It's a pretty good drawing but I think that if you really want to draw it with the song...I think that you should have drawn it more sadly. The song is sad. So, I'll have draw it with tears or things that shows us sadness. Otherwise, I think that you improve the fire! It's really nice ^^ For the background, I think that you can add more details on it. Same thing for the building that the characters are standing on. The shadings are great. But you could have exagerated on the buildings around the characters. The fire could have hide the line of the buildings. Because we can see the lineart behind the fire. Hope you'll read my critique! I really love your draw but the point of a critique is to help the artist to improve his art so yeah. I sometimes fear to give someone a critique because I think that he could take it personally and after it will turns bad. But, I hope that it will not turn in this way! See ya~
Hope you'll read my critique!
I really love your draw but the point of a critique is to help the artist to improve his art so yeah. I sometimes fear to give someone a critique because I think that he could take it personally and after it will turns bad. But, I hope that it will not turn in this way! See ya~
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